Jasmine Hart

That's great Claudette! Such an achivement! So proud of you!

Congrats dudes! That's some achievment!

Haha. I'm a scorpio too. It does seem quite accurate! I just looked it up myself to see if I could get anything extra, so here's some additional stuff :) ...

Hi. Welcome! Hope you like it here. How's your Nano going? Feel free to PM if you have any questions. Jas

Hi Neemii. Welcome! Hope you like it here. Ya, I can relate to the whole writing in class thing. I once got caught writing poetry in geography. Wouldn't tell my ...

Hi. Welcome! Hope you like it here, and, likewise, feel free to PM me if you have any questions, though admittedely Suzanne would probably be more helpful than myself! Ah ...

Hi Anna. Welcome. Hope you like it here. Do you have any favorite books? Anyway, hope you like it here, and, likewise, feel free to PM me if you have ...

Hey, these are great. You've really mastered the form. I'm not sure about the last line of "Ink." I think it could be more powerful. The last two were my ...

I agree with everything that's been said. Reading poetry will really help you. Keep at it, we're just a bit finiky around here (we're just trying to help, not break ...

Brigid I grimaced. "You could spare yourself the pain." I told him. "Death for rebellion must be the worst sort, based on slow torture to make an example." I shuddered ...

Thanks guys. Abigail It was not a long walk to the doctor's, thankfully, but I still felt guilty that Julian was having to undertake the task which my husband had ...

"The Hidden"

I agree with what's been said already. I especially love; "Of the eight tiny spiders you swallow in your Lifetime." That was really fresh and powerful. I also like how ...

The clock’s face is blank now I’m without you. All substance trickles through my hands like tears Though lessons are stored, I don’t have a clue What bitter sweetness could ...